Are These Actual Miles?

I didn't care for this story. I felt like it was a little anticlimatic. Also, the dialogue was bad. That's not how people talk, a lot of times there was something said which didn't make any sense, or there was some sort of feined depth. In fact I thought the whole thing was feined. Those moments when you're supposed to draw something out of a confrontation that isn't directly on the page, there isn't much to draw. didn't like it.