Tuesday, February 16, 2010

G-String

This story was okay. I thought the paragraph on the first page about Gillian supporting the local industries was random to her chracter. I thought it was funny how she turned down the bodysuit with Mr. Kip's opinion in mind, and even funnier was his reation to the G string. "Those are preposterous!" When Gillian tells Mr. Kip she's had it with him and his silly, affected, old fashioned car and clothes and everything, I thought he deserved to get it way more than that. I would have liked to see Gillian stand up for herself more.

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