I think the story was very fun to read. It kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. The two brothers seemed very curious and would always find new and exciting ways to get into mischief. I thought the characterization of the older brother was very good. The main characters perception of his older brother Rafa was very believable .It describes the relationship many people have with their older sibling. I can relate to the this story too because I looked up to my older sister. I would always try to follow her everywhere. We would argue but then forget about it and be friends the next day. I would love to read a longer version of this story. Would any one else like read a longer version of the story?